Falsesouth's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jumper (Waterflame) [Piano Cover]]

It is a little off tempo... either the lower octaves or higher ones are off... idk which but other than that it is alright. You won't have copyright problems; just avoid uploading other people's content ;)

[Adventures Awaits]

Feels like an adventure; exceptional production m8 :D

I can see the effort in this one

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks m8 :D

[Lets Go Higher]

This is really awesome work :D
my laptop is lagging so I can't elaborate sorry

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks and okee :3

[Tobu- Colors (IamRyanZ Remix)]

The mixing needs improvement so bad lol.. it sounds good otherwise m8 ;)

I have no idea how it got to this state though..

[Dalux - Energy]

Sick techno dude, keep it up :D

I did not really see anything wrong with it

Dalux responds:

eyy :D

[Pianore - Ceres]

First of all... please avoid using the default FL Studio drums... It is so cringy.

The intro was alright.. The buildup was okay but needed more suspense.

The drop itself had no impact.. Mixing and mastering can easily give it more power but that is just a start. The drums just don't make it feel like dubstep (back to my first point lol)

The glass sound from FL made me almost burst out laughing (thanks for that xD)

Some of the dubstep wobbles (etc.) were not correctly pitched and could have progressed a little better.

You have the basic dubstep composition (It gets a little chaotic at one point but it will get better with time), which is good but the sounds are not that good. That is where you improve and look at tutorials for heavier basses and other cool atmospheric stuff you can make. Then, you can try different things with that knowledge and design some original sounds.

I think 50 hours may have been too much just for one song (Use hours as a measurement because it is the most correlated measurement to improvement) ... at this point of time you want to work on projects that inspire you efficiently and quickly. With more skill you can lean towards quality :)
The more projects you make, the more experience you get. Focusing on one track for an extensive period of time is not really worth it (That could just be my opinion because I work differently but still).

Don't take this personally in any way. I used to get very similar reviews on my older tracks (maybe not in this many paragraphs but you get the idea). You will get better with time.

I actually want you to improve because everyone who tries has potential :D

If you have any questions or something you can message me. I may be able to help ;)

Also if you can listen to some of my songs that would be nice too. I am slightly inspired by Xtrullor too lol

-Chael (I really gotta change my NG name)

[Pianore - Goldilocks Zone (preview)]

The thing is that it is hard to mess up on these kinds of songs.

Either way, this is well done and I don't really spot anything particularly wrong with it.

Keep it up :)

[Angels]

I felt like this was kind of plain comparing to your other songs, and the drop was kind of strange but overall this is decent. Why wouldn't it be? There is very little variation, and keep in mind that repetition is good but leave that for the drop (you could still vary that of course).

Keep it up :D

[Euphoria]

Different can always be good :D

Keep trying different things because it ultimately makes you a much better musician. Plus, this is awesome and has evolved so much since the stream I watched ;)

ForeverBound responds:

Thank you. I'm trying to push my limits a lot more recently with the music I create. I'm happy to hear that it has a positive influence on my music!

[WHAT ARE THOSE! Dubstep]

Would have been so much better as a non meme song :/

really I mean that, because it is siiick

Delcherro responds:

Welp I can try