Falsesouth's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winter Night]

Did you guys practice a lot or something? This sounds really pro!

Keep it up.

TheArdor responds:

Not really...this just kinda happened :3
Thanks!

[[Ethan Lane] Video Game Demo]

Are you making music for the game? and if so >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Can you link info about the game? This track makes me want to know more about it. Nice job!

Etobio responds:

Thanks! :) I am "auditioning" to a guy who is making a non-commercial game. I don't know any information about the game as of yet. He told me to imagine a man walking through a strange desert...

[Visions]

Dum and bass.... xD

Better than the drum and bass I can do, so that is something. It just has the drums though and no bass which I guess is not a bad thing (ex. Stereo Madness). I think it is just a matter of listening to DnB to understand it better. Kind of curious what else you can do with the genre :D

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks Lol xD

[Skrillex - Make it Bun Dem (Jaxxn Remix)]

You didn't really put any creativity into this remix, so there is no reason for it to be here. When you make a remix, you have to add your own stuff to it. One pad, riser, and rearranging isn't much. There is almost no difference besides it being worse than the original. Just make your own music, because then it won't get banned like this might.

Honestly it just sounds too similar.

JAXXN responds:

Ok, everything except the vox is 100% made by myself, so it can't be banned because of me stealing the original. And I didn't rearrange it at all. I recreated the drop in my style with my own Massive preset. If there was no creativity at all, how do you explain my recreation of the synth and the 3 drops? Also, you said "Just make your own music" so clearly you haven't been to my page that has at least 10 other original tracks...

[Jon Toniq - Red Dahlias]

Very interesting, and a little repetitive, but nice work!!! Hats seem a bit loud too.

C-Enterprise responds:

Thank you for your review! I'll fix the loud hats for the final mixdown :)

[[Etobio] Star Gaze (ft. Macy McFerren)]

Honestly, I am not a fan of 'Dance' music, but I think this was nicely done. You can improve on the transition to the piano because it seems kind of abrupt in my opinion. The ending melody kind of drags out a little long as well. At least you know how to implement vocals unlike me xD! This, I think is a success and I hope to hear more from you!!!

Etobio responds:

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! It really makes my day when people see potential in me and they help me bring out that potential. This song was written at the beginning of 2015. I just got permission from Macy to upload it to Newgrouns/Soundcloud et cetera. I was thinking of remaking the song almost completely. I feel that the melody after the piano held the song back and took away from the overall "goodness" of the rest of it. Since the original composition of this song, I've learned many ways to add subtle effects that add so much to the grand scheme of things. Again, thank you so much for enjoying the song, commenting on what you think could be improved, and helping me bring out my full potential!

^_^

[Space cheese]

I don't know why I like it so much. xD... maybe it's the name, but it's basically a spacey trance drum thingy that is just enjoyable! Well done m8!

hGea responds:

Thanks, I was trying to get a really atmospheric track. I hope I succeeded.

[coming back in a]

I don't see anything wrong with it really....

Spurta responds:

It doesn't exactly loop perfectly, soooo
eh

[Rukkus - Fairydust (Ravitex Remix)]

Really enhanced the original. Yes it has mostly the same sounds, but it is more powerful and honestly I prefer this over the original. I can see why you were uneasy uploading this. Hopefully nobody will give you shit for this remix.

Ravitex responds:

Well, I don't see anyone giving me shit over this YET. And hopefully, nobody will!
Thanks for the review!

[~Exalted~]

I was thinking of doing orchestral music! The only criticism I have is that some parts are too quiet and need more power. The drums for example, the volume should maybe vary at different points of the song. Other than that, I like it. :D

Gravidi responds:

Thanks for the review. And yeah, I know that the mix for this song is really bad, I'm just to busy (lazy) to fix it XD. I'm glad you enjoy it though.